Sunday, June 10, 2012

My List Poem


Hannah’s List Poem

Aged 9


Interactive whiteboard- Telling us all it knows so we know it.
Books-Jelis because they are not getting read but we are using the netbooks.
Chairs-Thinking, why are you sitting on me.
Posters-showing us how to do stuff and making it better.
Computers/Netbooks-Teaching us how to write, read and do maths.
Tables-Letting us lean on them and put stuff on them (looking all messy)
Artwork-Making our classroom look all pretty and letting us learn new stuff about art
Jungle Mural- Letting us make a movie of them and then entering it into a competition
Heater-Warming us up in the morning when it is freazing
Teacher-Telling us all he knows to make us better readers, writers and better at maths
Boys- Laughing and carrying on being boys and interrupting the teacher when he is teaching
Girls- Chatting away behind the teachers back when he is not talking but when he is listening very well and getting everything right
Monkeys- Swinging along in the tree and yapping along all day not stopping
Keyboards- Tap, tap tapping along with all the kids typing on them

8 comments:

  1. Great Hannah
    Your poem is really great!
    What was hard about writing this poem?

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    1. Thanks Katrina.
      I found it hard thinking about really great words to describe all the words that I came up with. Thanks :)

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  2. What a lovely poem Hannah!
    The bit I liked best was...
    Girls- Chatting away behind the teachers back when he is not talking but when he is listening very well and getting everything right.
    I think you are very right about that.
    What was your favourite bit in the poem?

    From Casey.

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    1. Thanks lizard.
      My favourite part in the poem was the same as the one that you did, Girls-Chatting away behind the teachers back when he is not talking but when he is listening very well and getting everything right. I reckon that is quite funny. Thanks:)

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  3. Awesome Hannah.
    Your list poem is great, my favourite sentence is when you said interactive whiteboard- Telling us all it knows so we know it.
    What was your favourite sentence in your poem?

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    1. Thanks Pazza.
      As I said when I replied to Lizards, Girls- Chatting away behind the teachers back when he is not talking but when he is listening very well and getting everything right. Thanks :)

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  4. Cool Hannah!
    I love your list poem it is so good.
    My list poem is kind of like yours.
    What do you like about this piece of writing.

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    1. Thanks Amz.
      What I like about this piece of writing is that we got to chose what objects we did and wrote about them. Thanks :)

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