Friday, June 1, 2012

WALT Persuade Recycle Plastic







Dear Parkvale School,

Plastic should be recycled more often otherwise we will kill Native Animals and we will disturb the animals. We will also pollute the Earth and living creatures will die.

If we don’t save the Earth and we keep polluting the world will be a sad place because there will be no animals because they would have all died of being suffocated or of sickness from rubbish been polluted.

As we throw away this plastic it goes into a landfill or dump that most of it gets blown away into the sea where it is going into The Great Pacific Rubbish Vortex in the sea. The Great Pacific Rubbish Vortex is a huge pile of rubbish in the middle of the sea and it is twice the size of Texas and that should change by not making it bigger but not adding to it.

Instead of putting rubbish in the rubbish bin you can recycle stuff and make things needed around like a pencil holder to put your pens and pencils in. Once you have made a pencil holder you can decorate it with stuff like fabric and shapes or ribbon and if you are a girl ( like me,) you can put some sparkle on to it to make it look all girly.



Thanks lots!!!

By Hannah Hansen
Room 20 Year 5 Parkvale School
9  Years Old

5 comments:

  1. Awesome Hannah this is a great persuasion.
    This persuasion is really telling the reader to stop littering. Well done,

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    1. Thanks Flossie,
      I think your persuade is really good as well.
      Thanks

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  2. Cool Hannah!
    This persuasion has lots of details and is really good.
    Awesome!

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    1. Thanks Natasha,
      What is your favourite part in it because mine is where it says Plastic should be recycled more often otherwise we will kill Native Animals and we will disturb the animals. We will also pollute the Earth and living creatures will die.
      Thanks

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  3. Hannah, You present a persuasive argument but why should it bother me? It probably won't effect me as the world looks fine at the moment doesn't it? By the time the earth becomes a sad place, I won't be around. Tell me why my few bottles will make a difference.

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