Autumn Leaves

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                             By Hannah Hansen

                              The sun makes the leaves all crispy

and all wrinkled up like and old

raisin left in the sun.

                   

                         The wind shakes the trees and make the leaves

fall off all over the ground

and the leaves make a mess everywhere.

                                        

                                          The colours that the leaves

come in are amazing,

Reds, Browns,

Oranges and Greens.

                                The trees shake and shake not stopping till

   the wind dies down.

                                         

                                   The leaves have just fallen off

    and now it is winter and

          the trees are now empty looking  like a skeleton.

WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing SUCCESS CRITERIA	SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation)	✰
Made the nouns do something	✔
Started each new description on a new line	:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense (may include a who, where, why, what, when).	:l

This is my leaf that I made out of paper, die, leaves and coloured writing off the computer.

I really enjoyed making my leaf because I did it on the computer.

It was awesome making it and I am sure I will make another one sometime soon.

By Hannah Hansen