The words that we had to use:
- Quick
- Stand
- Out
- Suddenly
Then we had an option of:
- Oww
- Embarrassed
- Um
“Quick, pass the ball to me,” I call.
“Stand in the circle,” yells Olivia.
“Out of the way, I'm trying to shoot the ball in the hoop,” I say to Katie who is defending.
Suddenly, I get the ball into the hoop.
“Oww, the ball hit me in the face," I said.
Awesome work Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have done it on netball.
I like how you have done recording.
Well done.
Awesome work Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put the words in colour!
I like the sentences that you choose.
You had a clear voice when you had recorded.
Well done.